A New Fan Fiction

So I'm a bit of an amateur writer and I do it in my free time. So Since I was bored i decided to write a twilight fan fiction. based of a movie I saw. The Story is Called 'How Do You Fight Destiny?'. Here's a summary of it:

After his musician girlfriend, Bella, dies in an accident shortly after they had a fight, a grief-stricken Edward, living in London gets a chance to relive the day all over again, in the hope of changing the events that led up to her getting killed.

And here's a little peek:

'Really? You never tell me how you feel or talk about yourself. You don't want to meet my family. You forgot my graduation. We run into my favorite student and you act as if he has something contagious. Edward, I know you have the best intentions, but I feel like I'm a really high second priority to you. That hurts. And the worst part is . . . I'm starting to get used to it.'

'I don't understand.'

'I know. That's what kills me.'

'Bella I adore you.'

[With tears in her eyes] 'I don't want to be adored, I want to be loved. I can't. . . I can't do this anymore.'

Bella walked away from me with puffy eyes from the tears. She entered the cab and left. I watched the cab as she left standing alone in the rain. Then right before my eyes a car came swerving from around the corner and smashed into the cab. I ran as fast as I could looking into the cab . . . but it was too late.

So what do you think if you want to read it check it out here
If any of you guys have a fan fiction you want me to check out just tell me and I definitely will.